Hello there. I’d like to thank everyone for the onslaught
of birthday wishes. It’s great to know everyone is thinking of me today. It’s a
lot different than last year. I was a mess – My beloved baby Amber, aka "Shithead", was not
well, and she progressed downhill so fast. We lost her the following day,
August 20th.
This year, things are so much brighter. I’ve made a
lot of new friends, from eXtasy Books/Devine Destinies, and other spots, and I’ve
also gained a lot more responsibility as an author in the eXtasy Books/Devine
Destinies realm. Best of all, my sophomore novel, Away to Me, is coming
out sometime later this year!
Away to Me
Book 1 of the Tri-Town Series
A huge thank you to Cheryl Headford, Maggie Blackbird,
Taryn Jameson and Denise N. Wheatley for doing the cover reveal for Away to
Me for me on August 5th! I’m tickled to have such great friends that
are also uber talented authors.
August 5th was also the day I got the first
round of edits back from my editor at eXtasy Books for Away to Me. Despite
being accepted, it still needed a lot of work.
Away to Me was one of those stories that started off in one area and wound up
going into a completely different direction when it was looked at several years
later. It was originally written in 2014, as a practice run, and although I did
submit it to a publisher, it was rejected.
After looking at it in 2019, I can see why. It was
full of passive areas, and tended to feature too much of the pets’ antics. It
was over 74 K when I started revisions on it in May, and by the time I was
finished round one, it was down to under 60 K. I also removed areas where the
dog slid across the floor, or they were paying attention to him when they were
supposed to be discussing their relationship or their daughter.
It wasn’t all pet antics either, there were a lot of
mistakes overall, from using nicknames instead of full names and other things. I
learned that lesson from Stricken and its publication process, and I’ve
learned a lot more in the last six months, thanks to help from fellow eXtasy
Books/Devine Destinies authors, some of who are best selling, so they know their
business.
A couple of more passes saw it being cut down to about
55 K, which is about what it was when I submitted it to eXtasy Books.
In the pass with my new editor, Trish, Away to Me
lost over another 1 K, due to more passive areas. Again, it was stuff with the
pets. I removed the last two scenes featuring the pets, that was cut back to a
sentence or two.
However, to make up for it, and to add a bit of the “twist”
you see in my author tagline, I was asked to whip up a scene or two here and
there to smooth out some spots that seemed to end to abruptly.
In the end, the updated word count is close to 55 K. It’s
Novel Length according to eXtasy Books/Devine Destinies guidelines, and a few K
short of Stricken’s final word count.
I sent the accepted edits and new revisions back on
August 12, and heard back from Trish last night. She accepted my work (thank
heavens) and I’m now back to waiting for approval from our higher ups.
I’m not expecting this book to be out until sometime
in October (going by the 120 day guideline listed on the eXtasy Books submission
rules) but I could be wrong. Like I’ve said before, nothing is set in stone
in this business, so be prepared to have things be changed up on you (in a good
way) at any second!
You can add Away to Me to your wish list at
eXtasy Books here: https://www.extasybooks.com/978-1-4874-2630-9-away-to-me/
Thanks again for your continued support!
Book 2 of the Tri-Town Series
I’m back to plugging away on this one. It’s slow going
even though the first draft was written in 2017, because I’m adding to the
foundation of this story as I go. I’m deepening the POV, changing it up a bit,
adding more descriptions of things (which was lacking even in the better drafts
of this one) and doing my best to make sure I don’t have any of the same mistakes
in it that Stricken and Away to Me did before they were submitted. I am taking
all of the lessons I’ve learned from the last three years and applying them to
this manuscript.
I’m only on Chapter 2 of this one’s revisions, so do
not expect me to say it’s submitted/accepted for a while. I’ll probably be much
deeper into it once Away to Me is finally live, and I’m not worrying
about that one so much.
Thanks again for being so patient with me the last
couple of years. I’m doing my best to get a backlist built up, and get more
stories out to my amazing fans.
Have a wonderful week, everyone! I leave you with my
favorite song of all time… STRICKEN by Disturbed.






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